Indicator: number and percent of participants who revise at least two pieces, commenting on what they tried to improve in each revision. AND

Applied To or Data Source: Expert evaluation of all workshop participants who have at least two sets of essays (original, revised and revision comments)

Data Interval: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: 8 months into the program (so that participants should have several sets to choose from and time for mid-course corrections to be introduced)

Indicator: number and percent of participants whose revised pieces (two before-and-after versions) are judged better than the originals in a blind (no writer or dates given) holistic grading by a creative writing specialist AND.

Applied To or Data Source: Expert evaluation of all workshop participants who have at least two sets of essays (original, revised and revision comments)

Data Interval: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: 8 months into the program (so that participants should have several sets to choose from and time for mid-course corrections to be introduced)

Indicator: number and percent of participants whose revised pieces are judged better than the originals (for two sets) by a creative writing specialist when judged by the writer’s goals in the revision.

Applied To or Data Source: Expert evaluation of all workshop participants who have at least two sets of essays (original, revised and revision comments)

Data Interval: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: 8 months into the program (so that participants should have several sets to choose from and time for mid-course corrections to be introduced)

Outcome 2: Participants demonstrate they feel themselves to be part of a community of writers.

Indicator: number and percent of participants who can name three ways they feel a part of the community of writers.

Applied To or Data Source: Exit survey of program participants

Data Interval: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text:  8 months into the program (so that participants should have several sets to choose from and time for mid-course corrections to be introduced)

Indicator: number and percent of participants who act as part of a community of writers after the program (produce writing, continue library writers’ group, etc.)

Applied To or Data Source: Phone interview of program participants with checklist of behaviors

Data Interval: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: Three months after the end of the program.

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