Indicator: number and percent of participants who revise two pieces, commenting on what they tried to improve in each revision. AND

Applied To or Data Source & Interval: Expert evaluation of all workshop participants who have at least two sets of essays (original, revised and revision comments), 8 months into the program

Target: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text:  90% for those having 2 sets of essays (original, revision, writer’s revision goals)

Indicator: number and percent of participants whose revised pieces (two before-and-after versions) are judged better than the originals in a blind (no writer or dates given) holistic grading by a creative writing specialist AND.

Applied To or Data Source and Interval: Expert evaluation of all workshop participants who have at least two sets of essays (original, revised and revision comments), 8 months into the program

Target: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: 85% for expert evaluation of writers’ work with independent criteria

Indicator: number and percent of participants whose revised pieces are judged better than the originals (for two sets) by a creative writing specialist when judged by the writer’s goals in the revision.

Applied To or Data Source and Interval: Expert evaluation of all workshop participants who have at least two sets of essays (original, revised and revision comments), 8 months into the program

Target: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text:  95% for expert evaluation according to writers’ revision intent

Outcome 2: Participants demonstrate they feel themselves to be part of a community of writers.

Indicator: number and percent of participants who can name three ways they feel a part of the community of writers.

Applied To or Data Source & Interval: Exit survey of program participants, end of program

Target: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: 80% on questionnaire

Indicator: number and percent of participants who act as part of a community of writers after the program (produce writing, continue library writers’ group, etc.)

Applied To or Data Source & Interval: Phone interview of program participants with checklist of behaviors, 3 months after the program ends

Target: Clicking on a question mark presents the following text: 60% on post-group writerly activity.

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